My version of a Beach wars map (I know everyones probably tired of these) but I think my variant has potential and I'd like some feedback.

Heres my map and the variant:

Bungie.net : Bungie Online : Halo 3 File Share

Thats a link to my File Share and the map and game variant are in slots 5 and 6.

My map variant contains most of the items commonly found in Storm the Beach-style maps (falling fusion coils, turrets on the wall, etc.) But it has several unique qualities; players on the attacking team spawn in one of several floating open containers out in the water (I confess to getting this idea from the Storm the Beach map) but their are some minor differences such as two of the "boats" contain mongooses and only one person can spawn in these boats. They are also impossible to jump into from the water (I tried for about 15 min). The mongoose doesn't spawn until a few minutes after the game has started so the attacking team doesn't have an advantage. There is also an overturned "boat" on the far end of the beach (near the arch) where a Warthog will spawn a few minutes after the mongooses (or is it mongeese?) Now the territories. The first territory is on the wall near the stairs. There is a turret located near this to protect it and the surrounding wall. The second territory is in an open container on top of the big stone structure dividing the beach into two parts. The open container forms a "pill box" like those that were actually at Normandy during WWII. There is a turret located inside and the gunner has a fairly good field of fire down onto both beaches. The third territory is located in the building on the left side of the map if your looking out towards the beach (It's the one where the brute shot spawns and the bubble shield). The fourth territory is the lower level of Camp Froman (Right Side). With both these bases I have done my best to make them appear to be houses (complete with beds and nightstands). The fifth base is located where the spartan laser normally spawns and I have turned this into a kind of radio center with a radio tower located there and a radio set. The 6th territory is located in the back right corner of the raised walkway near the entrance to the main base while the 7th is located right next to the broken-down wall. The 8th and final territory is located inside the "Nazi Base" right in the middle of a large swastika.

I worked really hard on this so no flaming please if you want to see screenshots here Halo 3 Screenshot Viewer is the link

The game options are pretty much basic also just no shields and spawn with a pistol