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Standoff Race Beta!
Bear with me, this is my first map post and my first race map...

I have had this race track in my files for a long time, but it is Glimflicker that showed me how to make it way better. He didn't actually show me, but i looked at his map, and i hope none of you call it copying, but i thought his finish line and penalty box were ingenious.
I had had trouble getting the finish line to work for awhile and eventually gave up on it, but he did it just right, and don't forget imitation is the greatest form of flattery.
This is my first race track and it needs a good amount of work so if there are any pointers you can give me, ill do my best to make it better.
I know that the mancannons arent in the best location right now but I hope with a few suggestions that i can get a much better finish line orientation.

Download Map:
http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=16571484
Download Glimflicker's Game Variant: http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=15539692

[img width=800 height=600]http://randompictures.sitesled.com/warthogs.jpg
Warthogs anyone?

[img width=800 height=600]http://randompictures.sitesled.com/mongeese.jpg
These work too!

[img width=800 height=600]http://randompictures.sitesled.com/tunnel.jpg
Through here lies the falling fusion coils.

[img width=800 height=600]http://randompictures.sitesled.com/mancannon.jpg
Sweet jump!

[img width=800 height=600]http://randompictures.sitesled.com/penaltybox.jpg
My mid-air penalty box, or spectators booth.
Once again, though the design is mostly mine, I have infinite thanks to give out to Glimflicker and the ForgeHub website. And thanks to everyone reading and trying to help!